Monday, November 2, 2009

oh lumberjack, save me now.

Oh world,
What soft legs you have.


“The better to draw you in with
My dear”

Oh life,
What beautiful eyes you have.


“The better to trance you with
My dear”

Oh love,
What gorgeous smile you have.


“The better to gobble you up and
show you the true darkness with
My dear”

2 comments:

  1. i LOVE this one, ethan. the first line [oh world/what soft legs you have] is my favourite.

    i am a big fan of using repeating intros/exits if it's done tastefully and doesn't feel forced. this, in my opinion, is very much a sucess.

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  2. thank you thank you thank you!
    your praise is worth its weight in gold to me :]

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